Hi Rykar Thank you for sharing about a very special place of yours.
One of my special places in Rapahoe beach, especially just as the sun is starting to set. I find it very peaceful and magical as the sun starts to set the stunning last rays across the water.
Maybe you could find a photo of your Gran or Moonlight to add your writing.
Hey Rykar, it is Riley here from your class. That is a very good piece of writing. Maybe next time you check what size it is. Also you could tell us why you had to write it and what it was for. Bye
Hi Rykar
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing about a very special place of yours.
One of my special places in Rapahoe beach, especially just as the sun is starting to set. I find it very peaceful and magical as the sun starts to set the stunning last rays across the water.
Maybe you could find a photo of your Gran or Moonlight to add your writing.
Tineka
Hey Rykar, it is Riley here from your class. That is a very good piece of writing. Maybe next time you check what size it is. Also you could tell us why you had to write it and what it was for.
ReplyDeleteBye