Friday 15 May 2020

my name

Ride
Yells alot
Kobi is my brother
And
Rykar is my name

Im swag
Shane is my dad

Cool drinks are my fave
Oh my god is say when i see something cool
Oh my god
Lordi is my fave rock band

And
Nicole is my mum
Dad has a motorbike

Nana is awesome
Icey coke yum
Cars are cool
Eat your greens

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Rykar, You have put a lot of thought in to your name poem and I found out lots about you and your family. I like the format of your poem with each new part spaced out and the use of capital letters to start each line.

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  2. Hey Rykar
    Molly here from T1. Great job with your name poem. I like the way you haven't just done your name also other words like nice and cool. I remember I have done name poems in the past. Keep it up
    Molly:)

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